Sudden Storm

Birds Silent
Crickets pause
– just stillness

A distant rumble
drip, drip, drip,
Leaves dance – puddles form

Refreshing, soaking
Splash, splash, splash,
Fading light – gloomy

Dark clouds melt
Soft breeze stirs
– sounds return

© Chrissy Siggee – 2018

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11 thoughts on “Sudden Storm

  1. If you included the word rain and one more verse this poem it would be perfect to post on the d’Verse Poetry Pub Quadrille Monday… (44 words)


    • I didn’t know there was such a thing as ‘d’Verse Poetry Pub Quadrille Monday’ or where to find it or any other place to share my drivel – Also, I don’t think I’m ready to get back into doing much with my poems and stories – except enjoy it and posting on my blog where I can’t get to embarassed with my imperfections. – (long story) Thanks for your encouragement. I do appreciate it.

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      • That is perfectly ok. It does take a lot of energy to write and post and read other’s work as well. Just thought I would mention it. I was totally new at all of these kinds of poetry when I first started posting with them. They are a great encouraging group!

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