Life
At some point in time
you may think there is no point to life
as if it is passing in a blink of an eye.
The only thing that’s
on your mind are echoes of hatred from others –
Although – your mother and father
believe that you are one of a kind. 💗
Amelia Siggee – Aged 12
Encouraging comments much appreciated.
Archived in: 🦋 Children’s Corner & 🦋 Teen Reading
Really good
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Thank you.
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Well done Amelia. Very insightful.
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Thanks Pa.
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Excellent and succinct Amelia 👍
keep up the good work 👏
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Thank you
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a very competent poem, Amelia,
maybe change ‘on you mind’ to ‘on your mind’ and that takes care of any typos.
a great message, and very personal.
thank you
Grae:)
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That was my mistake. Saw it after I saved it. All fixed. – Chrissy
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