DAWN – Awaken the Senses

Posted June 27, 2025

Posted in 🦋 Poetry Mix

Dawn illuminates the sky

caressing the trees

Songs of the birds fill my ears

and slumber from my eyes

The crispness in the air

awakens the senses.

© Chrissy Siggee

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From my book: Glimpses of His Glory

under copyright:

https://catalogue.nla.gov.au/catalog/4537869

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8 thoughts on “DAWN – Awaken the Senses”

Posted March 14, 2023 at 7:34 pm by Words from a Lentil Institution

For example: slumber drops from my eyes. G:)

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- Posted March 15, 2023 at 8:34 am by Riverside Peace
  
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Posted March 14, 2023 at 7:33 pm by Words from a Lentil Institution

‘slumber from my eyes’ feels to me IMHO as if it needs a word to show slumber’s removal. Just a thought, but loved the imagery and it is a good thing. Best Fishes, G:)

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Posted July 20, 2022 at 11:37 am by 100 Country Trek

Thanks for sharing this.
Anita

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- Posted July 20, 2022 at 11:51 am by Riverside Peace
  
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Posted February 25, 2021 at 9:04 pm by derrickjknight

Nice focus on the senses

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- Posted February 26, 2021 at 8:02 am by Riverside Peace
  
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Posted July 14, 2019 at 5:42 am by hawk2017

Amen. Ty.

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